How can I improve on these lyrics I have?

that was pretty sick, you got a little weak in the first paragraph in the middle, i mean just a little. you have all these sophisticated words and then simple words. Then alot of your rap is a double ryhming bar, switch it up sometimes. also try alliterations cause those always go well with people. but over all it was a 8 or 9 out of 10

Who do you REALLY think is Satanist?

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I fed my sis's fish to my cat...?

My little sister was driving me crazy and annoying me. She kept telling me that her stupid goldfish would win in a fight with my cat if it had the chance. So in the end I put it to the test just to freak her out and shut her up. Trouble is that I thought I would grab fluffy (her fish) and throw it back in its tank in time before my cat got to it....dam things are so slippery! Now fluffy is in Mr Whiskers tummy. Can someone give me permission to gag my sister to stop her crying?

What happend to Mo'Nique?

I love her! And I think she DOES feel good about her size, if not she does a damn good job of pretending. This world is TOO FAKE so its nice to have someoe say "its ok to be big, big is still y"...the world is so e-d, why ppl worry about womens es is beyond me...get a deadly disease and im sure you wont give a shi-t.

Would a coal miner and a registered nurse be able to emigrate to Australia from US?

My husband works in an underground coal mine in West Virginia and has heard of people getting offers to work in Australia. I will be finished with school in a couple years and we have read a lot of interesting things about Australia. Would it be difficult to find jobs in order to move? About how much does it cost to relocate? (We are a family of 5 but don't plan on taking much with us) Also would we be able to afford housing? It seems much more expensive than here.

Poison dart frog lighting best answer to best explaination?

im getting 2 blue poison dart frogs at the expo. and a 18x18x18 exo terra tank. im also getting a 18 inch flourescent hood fixture. im keeping live plants in there ( pothos plant ) i wanna know wat kind of flourescent lighting i need. it has to be flourescent lighting. if u find it how much is it. also do i just need it for daytime right? and how long do i keep it on for. remeber im getting it at the expo. i need the best explanation for the lighting.

Where can I get afforable health insurance for a low income young adult?? please help?

With the new health care laws if you live in the US you can be added to your parents insurance until age 26. This will probably be your best and cheapest insurance. If it has been over 60 days since you dropped your insurance then COBRA (govt plan guaranteed to allow no preexisting condition which you now have) is not available. Some states do have a insurance pool. You may also qualify for medicaid. Your local hospital will have a financial aid area that can get you the info for that.